The zombie story gets a leeeetle too gross at the end there, and the ending is a bit too abrupt, so I went for the Greatest Challenge, although I agree with the person who commented that the last line should be more along the lines of "being able to do something in one sitting" or having enough time for everything, etc. Both (especially the zombie one) need editing for typos and grammar and such. But both were really good. :)
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Date: 2008-02-19 08:58 pm (UTC)Both (especially the zombie one) need editing for typos and grammar and such.
But both were really good. :)