You get to Vote for which Entry I should put in LJ Idol

[puppetmaker]

This week we were given two choices

My Greatest Challenge

Or

Young Zombies in Love

[Poll #1141041]

Comments

[tryslora]

I just wanted to say that the zombie story was really really cute, but ohhhhh I laughed out loud at your greatest challenge (as my son runs in at JUST this moment to show me the hammer he's just made in the craft area and starts banging on the table and then informs me how wonderful tinker toy craft bits are because he can reuse them oh there he goes again, back to the craft area) since I think I've lived days like that. I found your voice rang wonderfully loud on that one.

[puppetmaker40.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I really am at a quandary since both spoke to me. I figures the parents would really understand the interruptions.

[tryslora]

It also rang loud for my work, too, where everything is one interruption after another. *smiles*

[the-dark-snack.livejournal.com]

They were both good (but could use a bit of editing for grammar). I voted for the one I felt was the strongest though.

[1-rhiannon-1.livejournal.com]

I loved the zombie story but I literally laughed out loud at your greatest challenge entry. I've definitely lived days like that so I could totally identify!

[clauderainsrm.livejournal.com]

The only people who would click option #3 are your competition.*g*

[jenny_evergreen]

The zombie story gets a leeeetle too gross at the end there, and the ending is a bit too abrupt, so I went for the Greatest Challenge, although I agree with the person who commented that the last line should be more along the lines of "being able to do something in one sitting" or having enough time for everything, etc.
Both (especially the zombie one) need editing for typos and grammar and such.
But both were really good. :)

[readinggeek451]

I voted before I saw that you had actually written both entries; I thought you were asking which one you *should* write. So ignore my Zombies vote.

[sneezythesquid.livejournal.com]

When in doubt, always go with the walking dead. *nods*

[browneyedgirl65.livejournal.com]

I think they are both strong entries (although as others have said, they both need proofing and editing, which you'll have to find time to go through in one sitting, heh) -- I'm surprised no one else has gone the route you did of the guy losing his, uh, member during the, ah, enjoyment of it all ;-). OTOH, the constant interruptions is just brilliant, so I voted for that in the end.