You get to Vote for which Entry I should put in LJ Idol

[puppetmaker]

This week we were given two choices

My Greatest Challenge

Or

Young Zombies in Love

[Poll #1141041]

Comments

[browneyedgirl65.livejournal.com]

I think they are both strong entries (although as others have said, they both need proofing and editing, which you'll have to find time to go through in one sitting, heh) -- I'm surprised no one else has gone the route you did of the guy losing his, uh, member during the, ah, enjoyment of it all ;-). OTOH, the constant interruptions is just brilliant, so I voted for that in the end.